Laying in the darkness

Posts : 6 Join date : 2009-01-13

LAYING IN THE DARKNESS

What to do in this darkness
I feel no more
All alone by myself
I feel like im not wanted
And put back on the shelf.

Forgotten, Misplaced, Abused By You
So i lay here in the darkness
Holding my phone,Wait for that bite
About to take my life
While i lay here in the darkness.

How could this be?
Ive been replaced by a fucking mvp
You motherfuckers dont no how hard
This is for me!
I cant give in,I cant let go
Why is my life so fucking slow?
I guess its just me,This is how its
Ment to be,I fell like im drowning in the FUCKING sea.

Forgotten, Misplaced, Abused By You
So i lay here in the darkness
Holding my phone,Wait for that bite
About to take my life
While i lay here in the darkness.

LAYING IN THE DARKNESS
GOODBYE

Subject: Re: Laying in the darkness Fri Jan 16, 2009 2:09 pm

Wow Mitch, this is pretty good Surprised

-Kyle

Subject: Re: Laying in the darkness Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:46 am

I love your works. You got a lot of imagination. Oh my god... Very Happy

Subject: Re: Laying in the darkness Tue Jan 27, 2009 5:15 pm

Wow this is great. Very Happy

Posts : 111 Join date : 2009-01-25

I do not like your work, it is all cursing and makes no sense. What is the topic? What bite? This is a horrible poem.